THIS POST HAS BEEN REMOVED FOR PUBLICATION.
I have been playing with short pieces of fiction in trying to get the creative juices flowing;
this piece was more or less meant to be Chapter 6 of a new book that I am working on, but it has been slightly
adapted for a short story.
http://www.allaboutlove.net/index.php/love-stories/entry/the_rain/
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8 comments:
oh my
shamim is one of those characters to whom your hearts thrusts out from the first sentence, even though you know it is going to go on a rollercoaster of pain and resolution with her
i am intrigued
:)
Oh My Word...I can't wait for Chapter 7, 8, 9 , 10....LOL so gripping...
You can't do this to me, its torture! :D
ladies... thanks! appreciate the encouragements... but ths be only the first draft.. lotsa work to do here before its worth its mettle :P
lol... aah, words are torture; given a whole WHOLE new dimension!
mwah!
it's beautiful stuff Shafs. And now that I may finally read other things with a guilt free conscious, I look forward to reading the completed version.
sounds promising. first drafts often contain valuable gems, I've been told. So keep at it, then polish the gems until they dazzle :)
hmm.. meaning the blogger is no longer single? ;))))
sounds like a story to write about... reforming ur ways and all that...
@ saaleha... thanks for that!
HEY ALL
THANKS AGAIN FOR COMMENTS.
I HAVE BEEN ASKED TO REMOVE THIS POST AS THE CHAPTER IS TO BE BE REWRITTEN SLIGHTLY AND PUBLISHED WITH A WRITER'S NETWORK BEFORE THE BOOK :)
I TAKE THIS AS A HUGE COMPLIMENT.
THANKS FOR THE ENCOURAGEMENTS.
MWAH!
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