Friday, October 24, 2008

a bite out of chapter six/The Rain

THIS POST HAS BEEN REMOVED FOR PUBLICATION.

I have been playing with short pieces of fiction in trying to get the creative juices flowing;
this piece was more or less meant to be Chapter 6 of a new book that I am working on, but it has been slightly
adapted for a short story.

http://www.allaboutlove.net/index.php/love-stories/entry/the_rain/

8 comments:

Nooj said...

oh my
shamim is one of those characters to whom your hearts thrusts out from the first sentence, even though you know it is going to go on a rollercoaster of pain and resolution with her
i am intrigued

KimyaShafinaaz said...

:)

Azra said...

Oh My Word...I can't wait for Chapter 7, 8, 9 , 10....LOL so gripping...

You can't do this to me, its torture! :D

KimyaShafinaaz said...

ladies... thanks! appreciate the encouragements... but ths be only the first draft.. lotsa work to do here before its worth its mettle :P

lol... aah, words are torture; given a whole WHOLE new dimension!

mwah!

The Blogger previously known as singleguy said...

it's beautiful stuff Shafs. And now that I may finally read other things with a guilt free conscious, I look forward to reading the completed version.

Saaleha said...

sounds promising. first drafts often contain valuable gems, I've been told. So keep at it, then polish the gems until they dazzle :)

KimyaShafinaaz said...

hmm.. meaning the blogger is no longer single? ;))))
sounds like a story to write about... reforming ur ways and all that...

@ saaleha... thanks for that!

KimyaShafinaaz said...

HEY ALL

THANKS AGAIN FOR COMMENTS.

I HAVE BEEN ASKED TO REMOVE THIS POST AS THE CHAPTER IS TO BE BE REWRITTEN SLIGHTLY AND PUBLISHED WITH A WRITER'S NETWORK BEFORE THE BOOK :)

I TAKE THIS AS A HUGE COMPLIMENT.

THANKS FOR THE ENCOURAGEMENTS.

MWAH!